Troubling Thoughts

Well..when i took this shot i wanted to capture the feel of being deep in thought. Even tho you can't see her face, the way her head is cocked in thought, her curled hand, and deep scenery really gave off the feel of being troubled with troubling thoughts. xD >The tired elf stared far off, unable to control the thoughts of what she could have done to save that Orc. She kept seeing his bloody, mangled body. She clenched her fist and shook her head quickly. "I mustn't." She mumbled to herself. The elfs loyal fox looked up at her with a strange expression. The elf could not be troubled by those thoughts, she had a duty to preform, a world to save.> How was that? Was it good? I write WoW fiction to practice my writing. The only thing i don't like about this is when 'the loyal fox...' because i feel like it's too much. Let me know what you think.
Hey blizz WoW group..BTW..i put this in wallpaper because it's large and it's my PC's wallpaper..sooo....don't get mad, get a glad trashbag!